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	<description>Chris Hayes-Kossmann writes his way to publication... or DOOM.</description>
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		<title>By: Century of Sand &#8211; Chapter 8 (end of Part 1) &#8211; Scribbles and Dreams</title>
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		<dc:creator>Century of Sand &#8211; Chapter 8 (end of Part 1) &#8211; Scribbles and Dreams</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 00:10:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Alpha Slip (Novel Preview) [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Why analyse your own novel? &#8211; Scribbles and Dreams</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-369</link>
		<dc:creator>Why analyse your own novel? &#8211; Scribbles and Dreams</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Aug 2009 08:11:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Alpha Slip (novel preview) [...]</description>
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		<title>By: A preview of my current novel, Alpha Slip &#8211; Scribbles and Dreams</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-313</link>
		<dc:creator>A preview of my current novel, Alpha Slip &#8211; Scribbles and Dreams</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Jul 2009 02:31:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Continue to: Alpha Slip - The First Three Chapters [...]</description>
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		<title>By: 70k&#8230; approaching the endgame. &#171; Scribbles &#38; Dreams</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-231</link>
		<dc:creator>70k&#8230; approaching the endgame. &#171; Scribbles &#38; Dreams</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Jun 2009 02:25:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I really wanted to have another short ready to post here before the end of the month, but I haven&#8217;t even stopped to look at anything but Alpha Slip since May. This isn&#8217;t the quickest I&#8217;ve ever written a novel, but it&#8217;s the quickest I&#8217;ve ever written a novel that I liked. I&#8217;m thinking this draft will probably end up at the 80k mark. Then the second draft (which will be the first I release out to close friends for opinions) will be about the same &#8211; I can see at least 10-15k worth of rubbish that needs cutting, but there&#8217;s also a TON of secondary characterisation I completely forgot to include in this draft, leaving most of the characters as thin as a sneeze. If you missed my chatting about Alpha Slip entirely, I posted the first three chapters here. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I really wanted to have another short ready to post here before the end of the month, but I haven&#8217;t even stopped to look at anything but Alpha Slip since May. This isn&#8217;t the quickest I&#8217;ve ever written a novel, but it&#8217;s the quickest I&#8217;ve ever written a novel that I liked. I&#8217;m thinking this draft will probably end up at the 80k mark. Then the second draft (which will be the first I release out to close friends for opinions) will be about the same &#8211; I can see at least 10-15k worth of rubbish that needs cutting, but there&#8217;s also a TON of secondary characterisation I completely forgot to include in this draft, leaving most of the characters as thin as a sneeze. If you missed my chatting about Alpha Slip entirely, I posted the first three chapters here. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: ruzkin</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-230</link>
		<dc:creator>ruzkin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 May 2009 05:27:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Dad, thanks Rory! I&#039;m going to TRY to keep it going - I have 25,000 words done so far, which is about 1/3rd of the book. Maintaining the pace is going to be difficult though - I definitely feel that what follows on from the first three chapters isn&#039;t up to the standard of the opening.
Still, that&#039;s what 2nd and 3rd and 4th drafts are for, right?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Dad, thanks Rory! I'm going to TRY to keep it going - I have 25,000 words done so far, which is about 1/3rd of the book. Maintaining the pace is going to be difficult though - I definitely feel that what follows on from the first three chapters isn't up to the standard of the opening.<br />
Still, that's what 2nd and 3rd and 4th drafts are for, right?</p>
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		<title>By: Rory</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-229</link>
		<dc:creator>Rory</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2009 19:15:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Liking it Ruz. Excellent fast-paced first draft.</description>
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		<title>By: Michaelbede</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-228</link>
		<dc:creator>Michaelbede</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2009 10:16:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, that&#039;s a brilliant beginning. Had me completely. Can you keep it going?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, that's a brilliant beginning. Had me completely. Can you keep it going?</p>
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		<title>By: A preview of my current novel, Alpha Slip &#171; Scribbles &#38; Dreams</title>
		<link>http://www.ruzkin.com/?page_id=249&#038;cpage=1#comment-227</link>
		<dc:creator>A preview of my current novel, Alpha Slip &#171; Scribbles &#38; Dreams</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 May 2009 12:49:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Continue to: Alpha Slip - The First Three Chapters [...]</description>
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